Tropical Destination
Excursions, please stay awhile, no hurries.
Diversions, sights that delight, few worries.
Steamy night, soft southern breeze, love prevails.
Dreamy daze, as your eyes tease, our ship sails.
Navigate, full steam ahead, we explore.
Fascinate, white orchid scent, hearts implore.
Surging tides, romantic beach, perfect port.
Merging lips, my love in reach, cool resort.
A Note From Chris
This is my latest “take” on a “framed couplets” form. This poem has ten syllables per line and rhymed words at the beginning, (and perhaps the middle in some instances) and the ending of each line.
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Great job with the framed couplets. I like this a lot.
ooh… very nice… think I need to go on a vacay
Well I’m always up for a bit of adventuring!
hmmm..nice…i think i need to book a flight to the beach..beautifully evocative
Claudia, Thanks for traveling with me. Love your care and support for us newbies!
hey i dont mind a little love on the beach, the oceans got the right rhythm you know…miss my days on her shore…
Brian, I was tempted to “steam it up” a bit more, but then someone pushed me out of my hammock and suggested I go wash the car!